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let poetry sing

weekly prompt #4

Ash Raymond James
Apr 13, 2022
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Let us break some new ground that simply wasn’t possible on Instagram. Below is a music video, this week we want you to write one or multiple hellokoos on any aspect of it. Whether that is the lyrics, the video itself, the instruments or any other aspect you may find within it. Does it stir a certain feeling? If you don’t like the song, lean into that and feed off that emotion. It might allow memory to resurface and the writing could steer away from this entirely. Most of all, have fun and feel.

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Apr 14, 2022·edited Apr 14, 2022Author

Enough melody

to drag my bones from hiding

and move once again.

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You need to hear it

even when you’re convinced you don’t.

I think you are great.

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The looming dimness

with outbursts of blinding light.

There is still hope left.

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It’s funny really

how people become life lines -

they use love as bait.

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That last one has so much potential to be more. I’m going to transform it into a big piece. The imagery of us being lost in the lake and somebody fishing us out using their life line - it has legs that’s for sure!

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Jennifer Kumagai
Writes Jennifer’s Newsletter
Apr 14, 2022Liked by Ash Raymond James, Hellokoo+

It just exhausts me

Looking at this video

She really needs rest

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